Wednesday, 11 June 2014

Exercise 2: Write a caption


Using the same photograph as in the previous exercise, write a 50-word caption about the subject of the photograph (not the making of the photography), for a general audience.



John, the Winemaker


Caption

Amongst the hobbies that fill pensioner John’s busy life is that of wine-making.  He gathers ingredients from friends and neighbours and over time turns them into delicious drinks.  John also has a varied collection of Victorian nude postcards, which he displays, in his shed at the bottom of his garden.


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Monday, 4 November 2013

Exercise 5: Berger's Analyse an essay


Read Berger’s essay at least twice.  First, read the essay right through from beginning to end.  Don’t stop to look anything up or take notes, just absorb the author’s argument.  On your second reading (perhaps after a break,) read more slowly and carefully, highlighting or noting down key points or things you don’t fully understand.  Make notes during or after reading, in whatever way works best for you.


Summarise in one line the point of each paragraph.  Now answer the following questions:

Paragraph 1
The majority of people do not consider photography is an art form.

Paragraph 2
Few museums have been preserved photographs as art forms.

Paragraph 3
Art cannot survive and not become valuable property.

Paragraph 4
Photographs have little or no property value as they can be reproduced ad infinitum.

Paragraph 5
A photograph is someone's thought that was worth recording.

Paragraph 6
A photograph is a record, through the mediation of light, of a given event.
    
Paragraph7
Painting is the art of composition whilst composition canter enter into photography.

Paragraph 8
 Events portrayed are mysterious according to a spectator's knowledge of them prior to seeing the photograph.

Paragraph 9
A photograph bears witness to a human choice being exercised.

Paragraph 10
A photograph isolates, preserves and presents a moment taken from a continuum.

Paragraph 11
The only decision a photographer can take is the moment they choose to isolate but this 
gives the unique power.

Paragraph 12
A photograph is effective when the chosen moment contains a quantum of truth.

Paragraph 13
Photography does not deal in constructs, there is only decision, only focus.

Paragraph 14
Evert photograph is a means of testing, confirming and construction a total view of reality.


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1.    What is Berger's Argument?
Berger attempts to argue that photography should not (albeit in 1972 when the piece was written), be considered a fine art.

2.    How is Berger's socio-political stance reflected in the arguments presented?
Berger's communist background and views emerge clearly in his stance on ownership of fine art by the “nobility class”, thereby excluding access to it by the masses.  Because photographs are easily taken, reproduced and available, they are merely records of things seen by the photographer.  Therefore they have no rarity value and cannot be regarded as fine art.  Photographs can, in his opinion, be used as ideological weapons in a class struggle showing particular truths.

3.    Are you convinced by Berger's arguments?  If not, why not?
His views, expressed in 1972, reflect the situation vis a vis photography before the digital age.  It shows that strongly-held opinions can look ridiculous when set in current times where “the camera never lies” philosophy is patently untrue and where computer applications, used creatively, can become a work of art.  Many modern museums throughout the world now house exhibitions of photographs taking their rightful place alongside what Berger considers to be fine art.  Form, composition, lighting and structure are as important in photography as much as in painting and sculpture by artists such as Rembrandt and Michelangelo and their more modern counterparts such as Picasso and Van Gogh.  The main and perhaps only difference is that producing a painting or sculpture takes much longer than taking and adjusting a photograph.
4.    Berger's writing style. 
In my opinion, Berger is verbose and contradictory.  He uses long-winded confusing arguments to substantiate his far-left views  which emerge clearly as the driving force of his beliefs rather than relating to the aesthetic value of art.  His style leaves the reader confused as to his main points and makes it difficult to follow his justification to its clearly political conclusion.
 
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I had a complete mental block as to where to find this essay and finally came up with it after reading another student's blog!  I'll have to set to and read the essay twice as suggested in the course manual and think about it before committing pen to paper, as they say, or fingers to my keyboard!
I find it extremely difficult to analyse articles so feel it would be helpful to read the course support booklets on essay writing and critical analysis first.  I'll continue with the other exercises whilst I complete my reading.
I found several useful pieces on writing critical reviews so need to find some peace and quiet to absorb all the advice.

I've found the OCA booklet 'Academic essay writing', the Visual Arts critical review booklet and an article on Photo Journalism by Ron Frampton FRPS which I think is worth reading as well. 

Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Moving on

I've been stuck on exercise 5 analyse an essay and it's holding me back quite badly. I've decided to move on with Part 2 Photography in Publishing 1 and revisit analysing an essay over the next few days. I know my deadline is flexible but I would like to keep up with it as much as possible.

I've worked in design for many years and really got a lot of satisfaction using Photoshop, Illustrator and Quark Xpress in previous occupations.  My present version of Photoshop is CS5 and I look forward to learning new tricks with the help section on the OCA Website resources section.  I subscribed to a design newsletter for a couple of years some time ago and it gave some exciting layouts and designs which I incorporated in the work I did then.  The shame was that it ceased publication which was so disappointing as I found it extremely useful.

Over my working life I have also been on several one-day/2-day design courses for publications and am interested in how magazine/newsletter design has changed since I first started.  I was always told that you MUST use a sans serif font (Arial or Comic Sans for example) for headlines and a serif font (Times New Roman) for body text as it makes the eye flow along the lines of text more easily.  When I look at newspapers and magazines now this accepted standard seems to have gone out the window and any font anywhere seems to be the rule of thumb.

Sunday, 11 November 2012

Exercise 4 Research and Analyse




Picture 4: Afghan Girl 1984, Steve McCurry

Copied from website:


http://www.culturaitalia.it/opencms/en/contenuti/eventi/event_1788.html 
 


FIRST IMPRESSION – WHAT STRIKES THE EYE
This is a very strong image, very challenging with the subject looking directly at the lens.  I get the impression that this is a child/young woman from a very poor background going by the clothes she is wearing.  Steve McCurry has travelled the world making a living photographing the people he meets for the companies he works for, lucky man.  He is able to see a situation quickly through his years of experience, taking pictures as the scene changes and getting the strongest images.


THE GENRE
The genre would be either a simple portrait of the girl, whose name was Sharbat Gula which Steve discovered 17 years later when he returned to find her, or one with more of her living situation which could be used in photo journalism or a documentary.  This was part of a series of pictures documenting the area where she lived and the families in her village.  
  
See here for a comparison picture published in the National Geographic magazine in 2002, website address: 



THE INTENDED USE
Steve McCurry takes pictures for a living as part of a documentary of people’s lives where ever he is.  He builds up a picture of the land and people for each assignment and, if possible, returns years later to document the changes that have happened to his previous stories.


IMMEDIATE SITUATION FACING THE PHOTOGRAPHER
Steve would have been faced with a wall of human misery and people begging for help as this picture was taken in a refugee camp near Peshawar, in Pakistan.  It must take a very strong person to keep taking photographs in the midst of all that misery.


UNPLANNED OR PLANNED
Steve works in a planned but unconscious way having made his living through photojournalism for many years.  His natural instincts would have allowed him to look around, talk to people and get the best of an unplanned situation.


TECHNICAL DETAILS, IF IMPORTANT
The most important thing with Steve would be to get the shot.  His many years of experience after graduating from a photography degree and working as a newspaper journalist in his home state was his freelance work overseas.  Experience counts for a lot in documentary work and getting the right settings for a decent image come as second nature after many years of experience.


STYLE OR MANNERISM
Researching Steve’s style of picture shows that he prefers the straight face to the camera portraits, similar to that of the Afghan girl that we’re discussing.  When I googled his name 1,400,000 images came up in 0.28 seconds so his name is well recognized through the world.  The portraits on the first page all see to be in the same style that of facing directly into the camera, well recognized as a very strong image in portrait taking circles.


PHOTOGRAPHER’S INTENT
Steve has spent his whole life documenting world situations and sending back photographs to major publications and agencies.  The pictures he took of the refugee camp on the borders of Pakistan would be to highlight the plight of the people who had had to leave their homes and flee to a safer environment. Refugees would have been subjected to harrowing journeys leaving most of their belongings behind and having to stay in large, possibly barren areas with little food.  Photojournalists like Steve would be sent to the camps to document the desperate situation that the refugees found themselves in with the hope that the civilized world would send aid to help them.


IS THERE SUFFICIENT INFORMATION AVAILABLE?
I think there is sufficient information about Steve, his picture and the general situation that he found himself in in 1985.  Much has been published about the conditions in the refugee camps over the following years for the general public to gain an idea of how bad conditions would have been.


SUCCESS
This picture is instantly recognizable as Steve’s work as it has been published around the world many times.  The fact that it was the first image brought up when I googled Steve’s name shows it is well recognized.

 

Tuesday, 6 November 2012

Life's little hitches

Talk about thwarted at every turn! I've just got my head back in gear, ready to get on with the remaining exercises in part one of this module and I got an email from Apple saying that my hard drive has been identified as liable to fail at any time.  I could input my serial number and they would confirm it.  Do you know where the serial number is on an iMac, under the foot! Do you know how big it is, miniscule? I had to upend the machine on my overcrowded desk, find the number, take a macro picture as it was far too small to read and then upload it to be able to read the number. What a fiasco. Then it turned out that my machine really was one of those identified as liable to fail.

I really thought this was a hoax, hoping it was as it meant taking my iMac to Exeter (30 miles away) to the nearest Apple dealer to have the hard drive replaced.  Not only have I had to back up everything on the current drive but it will take about 5-10 working days as they are so busy replacing everyone else's drives. You can't make an appointment and wait so I'll have to go back when it's ready to pick it up, another day wasted. Ohhh!!

So now I'll be without a machine for up to 10 working days, just when I was at my most creative for ages.

Sunday, 21 October 2012

Made my choice of image

Well, I've decided which picture and photographer I'm going to feature in Exercise 4 Research and Analyse.  I had narrowed it down to either Shell Shocked Soldier, Hue, 1968 by Don McCullin or Afghan Girl, 1984, Steve McCurry.

I've decided to research the Afghan Girl image as I have more affinity with portraits and this one appeals to me more than the Don McCullin picture.  I'm sure my tutor would say that I should stretch myself by researching into either the street scene by Robert Frank or Pikes Peak Park by Robert Adams but I can't summon up any empathy with either of those images.

So Afghan Girl it is.

Friday, 19 October 2012

Procrastinating again!

I'm struggling to get started on Exercise 4, that of writing an analytical account of one of four images. It would be easier if there was only one picture to choose from, but four make it far more difficult.  I'm also struggling with having to write to Her Majesty's Customs and Excise over an unpaid tax bill back in 2010 which is affecting my mind set at the moment.

I must decide which picture to choose; I'm more drawn to people portraits than landscapes so can narrow it down to either the Don McCullin 'Shell Shocked Soldier'


 or Steve McCurry's 'Afghan Girl'

I can see the merit in both images but I have to research and analyse the background and that is making it difficult to decide.

I saw a Don McCullin exhibition at the Barbican,  in London, back in the mid 1990s and was shocked and disturbed by what images were on display.  It makes you wonder what seeing continued violence does to a person and how they keep going.